Wednesday, June 12, 2013

Pre-AP English II Summer Assignment

For freshmen advancing Pre-AP English II next year, please read Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card at least once. Twice, or even three times, would be preferable. Be familiar with the plot, characters, and to the extent possible, the novel's major themes (you'll have to decide what those are).

We will begin work with the novel when we're back-to-school in August. Be prepared.

English I Writing EOC Retest Students: Sample Short Stories

To become better familiar with the practice and strategies of writing the 26-line story, I have begun writing 250(ish)-word stories, at least one per day. Each story is based on a prompt (not necessarily EOC-style, but they get the job done), and I do my best not to have a story in mind when I create the prompt. Occasionally, I comment on the writing process, as well.

If you'd like to see the stories, check out my other blog Wordstorm. If you'd like to write a story based on the prompt, print out a 26-line page, and have fun! If you'd like feedback, type the story into an email and send it to me.

Enjoy!

AP Lit (AP English IV): Questions for How to Read Literature Like a Professor

Writing Assignments for
How to Read Literature Like a Professor
by Thomas C. Foster

If you begin early and work on this assignment consistently throughout the summer, you will be able to complete it comfortably by August. Although I do want you to read every chapter, you do not have to do every assignment: just choose 17 of the 28, and please choose some assignments from the beginning of the book, some from the middle, and some from the end. Also, do not write volumes – concise, yet thorough, responses will suffice. I prefer that you type, but blue or black ink and neat handwriting is acceptable. This assignment will be due the first day of class. NOTE: you may substitute movies for literary works in this assignment, but remember your choice of literary works and film are an indication of your reading background. Multiple references to Disney, Harry Potter, and Twilight might be questioned.

Introduction: How'd He Do That?
How do memory, symbol, and pattern affect the reading of literature? How does the recognition of patterns make it easier to read complicated literature? Discuss a time when your appreciation of a literary work was enhanced by understanding symbol or pattern.

Chapter 1 – Every Trip Is a Quest (Except When It's Not)
List the five aspects of the QUEST and then apply them to something you have read (or viewed) in the form used on pages 3-5.

Chapter 2 – Nice to Eat with You: Acts of Communion
Choose a meal from a literary work and apply the ideas of Chapter 2 to this literary depiction.

Chapter 3 – Nice to Eat You: Acts of Vampires
What are the essentials of the Vampire story? Apply this to a literary work you have read or viewed.

Chapter 4 – If It's Square, It's a Sonnet
Select three sonnets (you may google “sonnet”) and show which form they are. Discuss how their content reflects the form. (Submit copies of the sonnets, marked to show your analysis).

Chapter 5 –Now, Where Have I Seen Her Before?
Define intertextuality. Discuss three examples that have helped you in reading specific works.

Chapter 6 – When in Doubt, It's from Shakespeare...
Discuss a work that you are familiar with that alludes to or reflects Shakespeare. Show how the author uses this connection thematically. Read pages 44-46 carefully. In these pages, Foster shows how Fugard reflects Shakespeare through both plot and theme. In your discussion, focus on theme .

Chapter 7 – ...Or the Bible
Read "Araby" (available online, here). Discuss Biblical allusions that Foster does not mention. Look at the example ofthe "two great jars." Be creative and imaginative in these connections.

Chapter 8 – Hanseldee and Greteldum
Think of a work of literature (including film) that reflects a fairy tale. Discuss the parallels. Does it create irony or deepen appreciation?

Chapter 9 – It's Greek to Me
Write a free verse poem derived or inspired by characters or situations from Greek mythology. Be prepared to share your poem with the class. (Greek mythology available online and in your head)

Chapter 10 – It's More Than Just Rain or Snow
Discuss the importance of weather in a specific literary work, not in terms of plot.

Chapter 11 – ...More Than It's Gonna Hurt You: Concerning Violence
Present examples of the two kinds of violence found in literature (including film). Show how the effects are different.

Chapter 12 – Is That a Symbol?
Use the process described on page 106 and investigate the symbolism of the fence in "Araby." (Mangan's sister stands behind it.)

Chapter 13 – It's All Political
Assume that Foster is right and "it is all political." Use his criteria to show that one of the major works assigned to you as a sophomore or junior is political.

Chapter 14 – Yes, She's a Christ Figure, Too
Apply the criteria on page 119 to a major character in a significant literary work (or film). Try to choose a character that will have many matches. This is a particularly apt tool for analyzing film and video games – for example, Star Wars, Cool Hand Luke, Excalibur, Malcolm X, Braveheart, Spartacus, Gladiator and Ben-Hur.

Chapter 15 – Flights of Fancy
Select a literary work in which flight signifies escape or freedom. Explain in detail.

(optional chapters)
Chapter 16 – It's All About Sex... & Chapter 17 – ...Except the Sex
OK ..the sex chapters. The key idea from this chapter is that "scenes in which sex is coded rather than explicit can work at multiple levels and sometimes be more intense that literal depictions" (141). In other words, sex is often suggested with much more art and effort than it is described, and, if the author is doing his job, it reflects and creates theme or character. Choose a novel or movie in which sex is suggested, but not described, and discuss how the relationship is suggested and how this implication affects the theme or develops characterization.

Chapter 18 – If She Comes Up, It's Baptism
Think of a "baptism scene" from a significant literary work. How was the character different after the experience? Discuss.

Chapter 19 – Geography Matters…
Discuss at least four different aspects of a specific literary work that Foster would classify under "geography."

Chapter 20 –...So Does Season
Find a poem that mentions a specific season. Then discuss how the poet uses the season in a meaningful, traditional, or unusual way. (Submit a copy of the poem with your analysis.)

Interlude – One Story
Write your own definition for archetype. Then identify an archetypal story and apply it to a literary work with which you are familiar.

Chapter 21 – Marked for Greatness
Figure out Harry Potter's scar. If you aren't familiar with Harry Potter, select another character with a physical imperfection and analyze its implications for characterization.

Chapter 22 – He's Blind for a Reason, You Know

Chapter 23 – It's Never Just Heart Disease...

Chapter 24 – ...And Rarely Just Illness
Recall two characters who died of a disease in a literary work. Consider how these deaths reflect the "principles governing the use of disease in literature" (215-217). Discuss the effectiveness of the death as related to plot, theme, or symbolism.

Chapter 25 – Don't Read with Your Eyes
After reading Chapter 25, choose a scene or episode from a novel, play or epic written before the twentieth century. Contrast how it could be viewed by a reader from the twenty-first century with how it might be viewed by a contemporary reader. Focus on specific assumptions that the author makes, assumptions that would not make it in this century.

Chapter 26 – Is He Serious? And Other Ironies
Select an ironic literary work and explain the multivocal nature of the irony in the work.

Chapter 27 – A Test Case
Read “The Garden Party” by Katherine Mansfield, the short story starting on page 245. Complete the exercise on pages 265-266, following the directions exactly. Then compare your writing with the three examples. How did you do? What does the essay that follows comparing Laura with Persephone add to your appreciation of Mansfield's story?

AP Lit (AP English IV) Summer Assignment

AP Literature and Composition is a college-level elective focusing on critical reading, interpretation, and writing. Throughout the year, students read a variety of mature works of fiction and non-fiction in order to develop writing skills through a series of assignments in and out of class. This course aims to prepare students for life (and college) by exposing them to great writing and inspiring them to move beyond rudimentary assumptions and expression into higher-level insight and writing. Many of the works we read are challenging. The writing is frequent and requires a student to respond to readings that we worked with in class as well as works that have not been analyzed or discussed in the classroom. Research, synthesis, poetic analysis, critical thinking, critical reading, and critical writing make up the foundation of this course.

Enrollment in the 12th grade Advanced Placement English Program means that you, the student, have the training, the discipline, and the intelligence needed to succeed in an accelerated course.

Major Works: Textual Interface (Assignments)
  • How to Read Literature Like a Professor
    • Actively read this book and answer the corresponding questions from the handout.

  • Brave New World
    • This novel can be considered; fiction, science fiction, speculative fiction, and even prophetic. Read the novel and keep a list of details Huxley uses to illustrate his world.
    • In a brief composition, explain whether you fell Huxley correctly predicted the future. In other words, how closely does Huxley’s Brave New World society mimic out own. Remember, the novel was published in 1932.
Essay Prompts
In a typed, 500-700 word response that follows standard MLA format, choose one prompt.
  1. Do you tend to believe in the idea of fate or destiny; in other words, that “there are no random acts?”, or Do you believe in free will and the power to decide your path?
  2. Consider the following: “Sacrifice is a part of life…It’s not something to regret. It’s something to aspire to”. Analyze the concept of sacrifice, and then in a well written essay explain how the act of sacrifice is treated within literature.
All assignments are due on the first day of class in August. No exceptions or excuses.

Failure to complete any and all assignments will result in an F for the first six weeks, parent conference, and removal from the AP Lit course

It’s pretty simple; you have two and half months. Get it done.

Tuesday, June 11, 2013

Sophomores, Freshmen: EOC Retest Info

If you need to retake an English EOC exam, please do.
Testing takes place on the following dates:

Monday, July 8: English I & III Writing
Tuesday, July 9: English I & III Reading
Wednesday, July 10: English II Writing
Thursday, July 11: English II Reading

If you need to retest for another subject, do that too.
Here's the info on that:

Monday, July 15: Physics and World History
Tuesday, July 16: Biology, Geometry, and US History
Wednesday, July 17: Algebra I and Chemistry
Thursday, July 18: Algebra II and World Geography

All tests will be administered at W.T. White High School.
Please contact the office for more information.
Address: 4505 Ridgeside Dr, Dallas
Phone: (972) 502-6200

Monday, June 10, 2013

English I (Pre-AP): Ender's Game Quickwrite on Graff

The unknown voices at the beginning of Chapter 3 of Ender's Game, suggest that to get Ender away from his sister, Valentine, he'll have to be told a lie. If the lie fails, he'll have to be told the truth.
In a brief paragraph explain whether Graff told Ender the truth or if everything he said was a lie. Support your response with evidence from the text.

Pre-AP English II: T-Chart for Animal Farm Chapters 1 & 2

The first essay option in the Summer Assignment addresses Santayana's assertion that one must remember history in order to have a chance to avoid repeating it. To see how the animals may have already started forgetting things, complete the following mini-project (we did this in class for a grade, so if you were absent, make sure you show it to me after you complete it):
  1. Make a T-Chart
  2. Label the first column: Original Seven Commandments
  3. Label the second column: Old Major's Speech
  4. In the first column, list each of the second commandments
  5. In the second column, list anything Major warned against that doesn't appear as a commandment
  6. If something appears as a commandment that Major didn't warn about, put a star next to it.
Keep this for your essay-writing notes.

Thursday, June 6, 2013

Free Audiobooks: Jane Eyre and "Incorrigible Children"

Two audiobooks are available for free from SYNC this week (through June 12th).

Jane Eyre
by Charlotte Brontë

Orphaned at an early age, Jane Eyre leads a lonely life until she finds work as a governess at Thornfield Hall, where she meets the mysterious Mr. Rochester and sees a ghostly woman who roams the halls by night. The relationship between the heroine and Mr. Rochester is only one episode, albeit the most important, in a detailed fictional autobiography in which the author transmuted her own experience into high art. In this work, the plucky heroine is outwardly of plain appearance but possesses an indomitable spirit, a sharp wit, and great courage. She is forced to battle against the exigencies of a cruel guardian, a harsh employer, and the rigid social order that circumscribes her life and position.

OK, a lot of big words in the synopsis, but it's a good story. Please check it out. (Follow along with the novel by downloading the text from Project Gutenberg, here.)

The Incorrigible Children of Ashton Place, Book 1:
The Mysterious Howling

by Maryrose Wood

Found running wild in the forest of Ashton Place, the Incorrigibles are no ordinary children: Alexander, age ten or thereabouts, keeps his siblings in line with gentle nips; Cassiopeia, perhaps four or five, has a bark that is (usually) worse than her bite; and Beowulf, age somewhere-in-the-middle, is alarmingly adept at chasing squirrels.

Luckily, Miss Penelope Lumley is no ordinary governess. Only fifteen years old and a recent graduate of the Swanburne Academy for Poor Bright Females, Penelope embraces the challenge of her new position. Though she is eager to instruct the children in Latin verbs and the proper use of globes, first she must help them overcome their canine tendencies.

But mysteries abound at Ashton Place: Who are these three wild creatures, and how did they come to live in the vast forests of the estate? Why does Old Timothy, the coachman, lurk around every corner? Will Penelope be able to teach the Incorrigibles table manners and socially useful phrases in time for Lady Constance’s holiday ball? And what on earth is a schottische?

To get either audiobook (or both!) start at the download page.

You'll need to install the OverDrive® Media Console™ first, but the page walks you through that. The audiobooks have download buttons below the green sync-head thing in the third column of the page.

Enjoy!

Pre-AP English II: Animal Farm Presentation

If you missed today's presentation on George Orwell and Animal Farm, please view the Prezi below and take decent notes. Consider bookmarking the Prezi, so you can refer to it--especially the timeline--as you read.



More on your Summer Assignment HERE

Tuesday, June 4, 2013

English I (Pre-AP): Ender's Game Reminder

Be sure to bring your copy of Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card with you to class on Thursday, June 6th.

Students who do not have a copy (ebooks are OK), will have to stand all period: NO BOOK. NO SEAT.

BTW: A film version of Ender's Game will be coming out in November (too late to skip the book — ha, ha!). Here's the trailer:

Pre-AP English II: Thematic Links between Lord of the Flies and ???

Compare one of the themes in Lord of the Flies to that of another work we’ve studied this year (see below). Summarize evidence that supports your asserted theme from both texts.
  • Fahrenheit 451
  • The Pearl
  • A Christmas Carol
  • Anthem
  • Othello
  • Julius Caesar

Monday, June 3, 2013

Pre-AP English II: Lord of the Flies 3-Way Venn Diagram

In class we began identifying information to complete a 3-way Venn Diagram comparing and contrasting Ralph, Piggy, and Jack. (If you lost your handout, click and print the image to the left of this text.) To complete the assignment, follow the four steps, below.
  1. Label each circle: one for Ralph, one for Piggy, one for Jack, and none for Gretchen Weiners.
  2. In the “half circle” for each of the individual characters, list traits that only apply to that character.
  3. In the three in-between “triangles,” list characteristics that apply to only those two characters.
  4. In the central “triangle,” list characteristics that apply to all three characters.
Due: June 5, 2013

English I (Pre-AP): Shakespeare Small Groups

Tomorrow, June 4th, we'll be working in our small groups again. A reminder of your group and your reading assignment for tonight (and a link to the text) appear below.

Group 1, reading Act 4, Scene 5
Erick
Alma
D'Ontae

Group 2, reading Act 4, Scene 3
Alvaro
Deanna
Natalie
Jessica

Group 3, reading Act 4, Scene 2
Leslie
Marco
Govii
Rodolfo

Group 4, reading Act 4, Scene 1
Elizabeth
Tony
Jose

Thursday, May 30, 2013

Free Audiobooks: Shakespeare's Tempest and a Mermaidish Story

Two audiobooks are available for free from SYNC this week (through June 5th).

The Tempest
by William Shakespeare

A storm rages. Prospero and his daughter watch from their desert island as a ship carrying the royal family is wrecked. Miraculously, all on board survive. Plotting, mistaken identities, and bewitching love follow as the travelers explore the strange place of spirits and monsters.

This is one of my favorite Shakespearean comedies (not necessarily ha-ha funny, but it doesn't end in a bloodbath like most Shakespearean tragedies or histories). Please check it out. (Follow along with the No Fear version here; download the text from Project Gutenberg here.)

Of Poseidon
by Anna Banks

Galen, prince of the Syrena [mermaids/mermen], is sent to land to find a girl he’s heard can communicate with fish and after several encounters with her Galen becomes convinced Emma holds the key to his kingdom.

To get either audiobook (or both!) start at the download page.

You'll need to install the OverDrive® Media Console™ first, but the page walks you through that. The audiobooks have download buttons below the green sync-head thing in the third column of the page.

Enjoy!

Tuesday, May 28, 2013

AP III Summer Assignment

AP English Language and Composition – Grade 11 Summer Reading and Writing Assignments

AP English Language and Composition, a college-level elective exploring the uses and power of language, challenges students to develop habits of analytical reading, critical thinking, and persuasive writing. It is actually two courses for the price of one, in that the journey we take toward becoming “effective citizen rhetoricians,” as the College Board intends, travels along the road of literature. Everything we study in some way touches on the two essential questions: “How and why do writers do what they do to say what they say?” and “What is American?” Your summer assignments will introduce you to the fundamental reading and writing processes we will continue to develop throughout the course, as preparation for the AP English Language and Composition Exam next May, as well as for rich and rewarding lives using and enjoying the power of language.

Major Works
Animal Farm by George Orwell. You are to read and annotate this novel and use it as your basis for the essay prompt. You are expected read actively and analytically, which will be demonstrated by the notes you take in your copy of Animal Farm. Simply underlining sections of the novel is not sufficient.

Essay
As we will explore this year, much of our study of literature and rhetoric revolves around the idea that America is itself an argument, both as an idea as well as a tension arising from the conflict between competing ideas. Choose one of the following prompts and compose an essay (not to exceed two typed, double-spaced pages) in which you articulate your argument.
  1. George Santayana wrote, “Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it.” In a well organized essay, defend, challenge or qualify the validity of this statement. Use examples from your own reading, observation, or experience to support your position.

  2. Ralph Waldo Emerson an American rhetorician and essayist wrote, “The end of the human race will be that it will eventually die of civilization.” In a well organized essay, defend, challenge or qualify the validity of this statement. Use examples from your own reading, observation, or experience to support your position.
All assignments are due on the first day of class in August. No exception or any excuses will be accepted. Obviously, since you enrolled in this course, you already enjoy language and ideas. In addition to the above, we hope you will also read books of your own choosing for pleasure anyway this summer (which we strongly encourage you to do).

For questions about your assignment or the course, please contact:
Mrs. Sustaita (Scheffers): kscheffers@dallasisd.org
Mrs. Dorman: adorman@dallasisd.org

Friday, May 24, 2013

All Classes: 20% at Half Price Books


Half Price Books is having a 20%-off sale this (long) weekend. A perfect time to pick up a copy of George Orwell's Animal Farm and/or Orson Scott Card's Ender's Game.

Or a nice gift for Mr. Mikesell.

You decide.

Thursday, May 23, 2013

English Students: Public Education Problems/Solutions

In class, you were given a packet of two articles: In a well-developed paragraph, respond to the following prompt:
Which essay (if either) do you agree with and why? Support your response with at least two well-chosen pieces of embedded text evidence.
The assignment is due on the day of your course ACP (periods 1 and 2, 5/24; period 4, 5/28).

Tuesday, May 21, 2013

English Students: Terms You Should Know

Many of these we've been over before, but here's a reminder of some of the less-common literary devices and grammatical terms:

Anadiplosis
The repetition of the last word of one clause at the beginning of the following clause.
"Fear is the path to the dark side. Fear leads to anger. Anger leads to hate. Hate leads to suffering." —Yoda

Antimetabole
A sentence strategy in which the arrangement of ideas in the second clause a reversal of the first.
Ask not what your country can do for you; ask what you can do for your country. —John F. Kennedy

Antithesis
Juxtaposition of contrasting words or ideas.
"It has been my experience that folks who have no vices have very few virtues." —Abraham Lincoln

Assonance
Repetition of similar vowel sounds, preceded and followed by different consonants (not necessarily the same letter).
The seargant asked Juan to bomb the lawn thoughtfully.

Asynedeton
deliberate omission of conjunctions in a series of related clauses.
Caesar: "I came; I saw; I conquered." (not "I came, I saw, and I conquered."

Consonance
The repetition of consonants in words stressed in the same place (but whose vowels differ).
Justin added mustard to his toasted roast beef sandwich.

Ellipsis
The deliberate omission of a word or words, which are readily implied by the context (does not involve …).
"The average person thinks he isn't." –Father Larry Lorenzoni
(average is implied at the end of the sentence)

Epanalepsis
The repetition at the end of a clause of the word that occurred at the beginning of the clause.
"Believe not all you can hear, tell not all you believe." —Native American proverb

Epistrophe
The repetition of the same word or group of words at the ends of successive clauses (reverse anaphora.)
“…government of the people, by the people, for the people.” –Abraham Lincoln

Inversion
In grammar, a reversal of normal word order, especially the placement of a verb ahead of the subject.
"In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit." —J.R.R. Tolkein, The Hobbit
(not A hobbit lived in a hole in the ground.)

Metonymy
Reference to something or someone by naming one of its attributes.
I hate when a bunch of suits come in my room to evaluate me. (people who wear suits)

Polysyndeton
The deliberate use of many conjunctions for special emphasis.
"[I]t is respectable to have no illusions–and safe–and profitable–and dull." —Joseph Conrad, Lord Jim

Pun
A play on words, either on different senses of the same word or on the similar sense or sound of different words.
I would like to go to Holland someday. Wooden shoe? (Wouldn’t you? – wooden shoes are worn in Holland)

Synedoche
A whole is represented by naming one of its parts.
You've got to come take a look at my new set of wheels. (look at my car, which has wheels)

CLAUSES
A component of a sentence (or entire sentence) that has a noun and a verb.

Independent clause
Can stand on its own as a complete sentence.
Low pay and constant grief are two of my job’s perks.

Dependent/Subordinate clause
Cannot stand on its own; usually contains a WABU); followed by a comma if it comes at the beginning of a sentence.
  • When you get home, call me.
  • Call me when you get home.
PHRASES
A component of a sentence that does not have a noun and a verb (may have one or the other)

Appositive phrase
A noun phrase set off by commas that defines the noun next to it in a sentence.
Clifford, the messiest eater at the table, spewed mashed potatoes like an erupting volcano.

Infinitive phrase
A verb phrase beginning with the “to” form of a verb.
Lakesha hopes to win the approval of her mother by switching her major from fine arts to pre-med.

[if the infinitive phrase interrupts the sentence, it gets comma before and after:
Those basketball shoes, to be perfectly honest, do not complement the suit you are planning to wear to the interview.]

Participial phrase
A phrase beginning with a participle (often –ing or –en), usually set off by commas.
  • Dave saved his money, hoping he could afford a PS4 when it came out.
  • Driven by a need to succeed, Jill backstabbed co-workers whenever it worked to her advantage.
Prepositional phrase
A phrase beginning with a preposition (fills the gap in “the squirrel ran ________ the trees); followed by a comma if it comes at the beginning of a sentence.
  • From where I stand, it looks like students need to study more.
  • The family only buys clothes from Target.

Friday, May 17, 2013

All Classes: Free Audiobooks this Summer

As mentioned in some classes today, you have an opportunity to get 24 free audiobooks this summer. Check out the Download Schedule and sign up for text/e-mail reminders.

There are some very good titles here: Shakespeare's Hamlet (you'll read it as a senior) and The Tempest (one of my favorite Shakespearean comedies); Frankenstein (good chance you'll read that senior year, too); Bless Me, Ultima; and Martin Luther King, Jr.'s "Letter from Birmingham Jail."

In addition to the dozen "classic" literature choices, there are also 12 "young adult" picks. Death Cloud, Rotters, and Once look interesting to me.

Enjoy!

Thursday, May 16, 2013

Pre-AP English II: Lost at Sea

As a means to understand that survival in a hostile environment (such as the one the boys in Lord of the Flies find themselves) we engaged in a little practice exercise where groups of 3 to 4 had to survive on a life raft carrying only a few items from their sinking yacht.

You can play along, too: Lost at Sea! (hint: you'll only be able to carry your top six things (#1-6) onto the raft.)

Pre-AP English II: Allusions, Allegories, and Analogies

In class today we began looking at a presentation on Allusions, Allegories, and Analogies. If you missed it, or wanted to revisit it, check it out, below.

Wednesday, May 15, 2013

English Classes: Reading Reminders

Pre-AP English II: You need to have read through Chapter Four of Lord of the Flies by the time we come together tomorrow. (See this earlier blog post for a way to get the text of the novel free.)

English I (Pre-AP): You need to have read from Act 2, Scene 2, through Act 2, Scene 6 of Romeo and Juliet (Ms. Muñoz is going to talk to her students and see if some want to re-sell you their copies of the book. If you don't have a copy, start bringing $5 to school to pick up a copy as they come available).

Pre-AP English II: How Words Are Added To Dictionaries

Those students who were in class today were presented with these two brief articles
  1. Why F. Scott Fitzgerald Is All Over the Dictionary
  2. How do you decide what to include in a dictionary?
and then answered the following question:
Do you think the way words are added to the dictionary (as per the two articles) is fair? Support your reasoning with evidence from one or both articles.
Please do likewise.

Saturday, May 11, 2013

Pre-AP English II: Text of Lord of the Flies

Although you aren't enrolled in Mr. Heald's GCSE English class, I don't suppose there's anything to stop you from going to his website and availing yourself of the links to .doc and .pdf versions of Lord of the Flies for your digital device.

Enjoy.

Thursday, May 9, 2013

Pre-AP English II: Bring Lord of the Flies Tomorrow

Practice bringing your copy of William Golding's Lord of the Flies to school every day next week by bringing it to school tomorrow!

(Your cover may differ.)

Tuesday, May 7, 2013

English I (Pre-AP): Play-writing Preview

Tomorrow you'll be working on your play.

Your play should include:
  • 3 characters
    • #1 wants to befriend/have a relationship with #2
    • #3 likes #1 but hates #2
  • A prologue (basic plot)
  • 1 Act
  • 3 Scenes (beginning, middle, end)
    • Setting and introduction of characters at beginning of each scene
    • Everyone goes off stage (“exeunt all”) at end of each scene
  • At least 5 stage directions for each scene
  • Stage directions should be in square brackets [ ]
  • Play is 90% dialogue
  • Should last about 5-10 minutes

Friday, April 26, 2013

Pre-AP English II: Free Julius Caesar E-Book

Project Gutenberg has free no-frills Julius Caesar e-texts available for Kindle and iBooks/Kobo reader apps. Click the appropriate link below to get the file, then sync it to your reader. Enjoy!

Thursday, April 25, 2013

Pre-AP English II: Othello Act V Test Preview

In addition to reviewing today's notes on analyzing author's purpose, you should know the characteristics of these literary devices:
  • Alliteration
  • Allusion
  • Anaphora
  • Metaphor
  • Onomatopoeia
  • Paradox
  • Personification
  • Simile
  • Verbal Irony

English I (Pre-AP): Fahrenheit 451 Test Preview

Here's what you need to know for tomorrow's test:
  • Alliteration
  • Allusion
  • Flashback
  • Foreshadowing
  • Hyperbole
  • Irony
  • Metaphor
  • Onomatopoeia
  • Paradox
  • Personification
  • Simile
  • Tone
Knowing the "Burning Bright" section of the novel and reviewing today's in-class notes probably wouldn't hurt, either.

Friday, April 19, 2013

English Classes: Weekend Reading Joy

Sophomores: You need to read up to the end of Othello, Act 4.

Freshmen: You need to read Fahrenheit 451 up to the break in the middle of page 154 (which is 451 backwards, as someone mentioned as we left the library this morning).

Feel free to finish reading either text, though. The sections above are the minumum you should read. You don't want to be known as someone who only does the bare minimum, do you?

Get reading!

Pre-AP English II: Psychological Manipulation

In class we read an article about psychological manipulation and compared it to the techniques Iago uses in Othello. If you missed it, please read the article and answer the following question:
The article discusses ways to use psychological manipulation to harm others. Please identify and describe one way you could use the ideas contained in the article in a CONSTRUCTIVE way.

Wednesday, April 17, 2013

English I (Pre-AP): Fahrenheit 451 Vocabulary Set #2

Write the definition of each vocabulary word in the space following the part of speech. Make sure the definition you choose matches the way the vocabulary word is used in the sentence from the text, below.

Use a dictionary or dictionary.com!
  • Bewildered (adj.):
  • Cite (v.):
  • Disperse/-ing (v.):
  • Draught (n.):
  • Filigree (adj.):
  • Fold (n.):
  • Hone/-d (v.):
  • Latrine (n.):
  • Murmur (n.):
  • Mush (n.):
  • Needle/-ing (v.):
They sat, not touching her, bewildered with her display. (100)

“I’ve always said poetry and tears, poetry and suicide and crying and awful feelings, poetry and sickness; all that mush!” (101)

…she had started on her own slow process of dispersing the dynamite in her house, stick by stick. (102)

It was good listening to the beetle hum, the sleepy mosquito buzz and delicate filigree murmur of the old man’s voice…. (103)

By the time I was forty my blunt instrument had been honed to a fine cutting point for me. (104)

Montag had to rice from the game and go to the latrine to wash his hands. (105)

“The crisis is past and all is well, the sheep returns to the fold.” (105)

“There shallow draughts intoxicate the brain.…” (106)

“Stop blushing. I’m not needling, really I’m not.” (106)

“‘The devil can cite scripture for his purpose.’” (106)

When you are confident you have the correct definitions, see me and you can complete the post-project quiz.

Pre-AP English II: Othello Vocabulary Set #2

Write the definition of each vocabulary word in the space following the part of speech. Make sure the definition you choose matches the way the vocabulary word is used in the sentence from the text, below. Use a dictionary or dictionary.com!
  • Bounteous (adj.)
  • Cunning (n.)
  • Discretion (n.)
  • Err (v.)
  • Hence (adv.)
  • Languish (v.)
  • Politic (adj.)
  • Solicitor (n.)
  • Suitor (n.)
  • ’Twas (cont.)
  • Warrant (v)
Emilia: Good madam, do, I warrant it grieves my husband / As if the cause were his (3.3.3-4)

Cassio: Bounteous madam, / Whatever shall come of Michael Cassio,/ He’s never anything but your true servant (3.3.7-8)

Desdemona: He shall in strangeness stand no farther off / Than in a politic distance. (3.3.12-13)

Desdemona: Therefore be merry, Cassio, / For thy solicitor shall rather die /Than give thy cause away (3.3.26-28)

Desdemona: Well, do your discretion. (3.3.34)

Othello: I do believe ’twas he. (3.3.40)

Desdemona: I have been talking with a suitor here, / A man that languishes in your displeasure (3.3.42-43)

Desdemona: For if he be not one that truly loves you / That errs in ignorance and not in cunning, / I have no judgment in an honest face. (3.3. 48-50)

Othello: Went he hence now? (3.3.51)

When you are confident you have the correct definitions, see me and you can complete the post-project quiz.

English I (Pre-AP): What's in a Name Project

Authors often choose names based on what they symbolize (Grant is generous, Joy is happy) or what they may allude to (Adam or Eve to the Genesis account of mankind’s origin). Montag’s name in Fahrenheit 451 refers to a brand of paper; Faber refers to a brand of pencil (the relationship between pencil and paper can be seen in the relationship between the two men). As the protagonist of your own story, your life, what does your name say about you?

Collect the following information, then create a poster (8.5 x 11—regular paper size—or larger) displaying everything you know about your name.

What does your name mean (first, middle, last)—You may look it up in a baby-naming book at a bookstore or online at a site like babynamesworld.parentsconnect.com. Last names can be found at genealogy.familyeducation.com.

If possible, ask your parents why they chose the name(s) they gave you and write down their response(s).

How much is your name a part of your identity? What do you feel your name “says” about you? If you changed your name would you become a different person? Why or why not? Include this information in your poster, too.

Due: April 23rd—you may orally present your poster in class for extra credit.

Pre-AP English II: Iago's Web

Track the web of destruction Iago generates as he manipulates Othello toward his doom. (see partial example at bottom of post)

Step One:
Place the following character names in a circle extending to near the edges of your paper.
  • Brabantio
  • Cassio
  • Desdemona
  • The Duke
  • Emilia
  • Othello
  • Montano
  • Roderigo
Step Two:
Draw lines citing the relationship between the characters prior to Iago’s campaign of manipulation. (For instance, the line between Brabantio and Desdemona would be labeled “father/daughter.”)

Step Three:
Then place Iago somewhere within the web you’ve made and in a different color, connect the relationships he has with the characters and how his involvement has tainted the other characters’ relationships. (For instance, a red line between Brabantio and Desdemona labeled “Brabantio disowns Desdemona.”

Step Four:
Keep adding “Iago lines” until the end of the play. (The new line connecting The Duke to Othello will be one of the last added.)

Due Date: April 26, 2013


Your project will have more information than this on it.

Thursday, April 11, 2013

English I (Pre-AP): Fahrenheit 451 Test Preview

Tomorrow's test will cover scenes from pages 60-68 in the novel and cover the following literary devices:
  • alliteration
  • flashback
  • foreshadowing
  • hyperbole
  • irony
  • metaphor
  • onomatopoeia
  • oxymoron
  • personification
  • paradox
  • simile
  • symbolism
Be very prepared.

Pre-AP English II: Othello Act One Test Preview

The following literary devices will be on tomorrow's test. Know them well.
  • Alliteration
  • Allusion
  • Anaphora
  • Hyperbole
  • Metonymy
  • Onomatopoeia
  • Oxymoron
  • Personification
  • Simile

    as well as

  • Dramatic Irony
  • Situational Irony
  • Verbal Irony

English I (Pre-AP): Fahrenheit 451 Vocabulary

Write the definition of each vocabulary word in the space following the part of speech. Make sure the definition you choose matches the way the vocabulary word is used in the sentence from the text, below.

Use a dictionary!
  • Compressed (v.):
  • Gesture (n.):
  • Gorging (adj.):
  • Hysterical (adj.):
  • Igniter (n.):
  • Illumination (n.):
  • Luxuriously (adv.):
  • Marionette (n.):
  • Pedestrian (n.):
  • Pulverized (v.):
  • Tatters (n.):
  • Venomous (adj.):
With the brass nozzle in his fists, with this great python spitting its venomous kerosene upon the world, the blood pounded in his head, and his hands were the hands of some amazing conductor playing all the symphonies of blazing and burning to bring down the tatters and charcoal ruins of history. (3)

[H]e flicked the igniter and the house jumped up in a gorging fire that burned the evening sky red and yellow and black. (3)

[H]e showered luxuriously, and then, whistling, hands in pockets, walked across the upper floor of the fire station and fell down the hole. (4)

Or was the atmosphere compressed merely by someone very quietly there, waiting? (5)

It was not the hysterical light of electricity but—what? But the strangely comfortable and rare and gently flattering light of the candle. (7)

[H]is mother had found and lit a last candle and there had been a brief hour of rediscovery, of such illumination that space lost its vast dimensions and drew comfortably around them. (7)

It’s like being a pedestrian, only rarer. (9)

[S]he was like the eager watcher of a marionette show, anticipating each flicker of an eyelid, each gesture of his hand, each flick of a finger, the moment before it began. (11)

He felt that the stars had been pulverized by the sound of the black jets and that in the morning the earth would be covered with their dust like a strange snow. (14)

When you are confident you have the correct definitions, see me and you can complete the post-project quiz.

Pre-AP English II: Othello Vocabulary

Write the definition of each vocabulary word in the space following the part of speech. Make sure the definition you choose matches the way the vocabulary word is used in the sentence from the text, below. Use a dictionary!

  • Abhor (v)
  • Bombast (adj)
  • Epithet (n)
  • Hold (v)
  • Homage (n)
  • Obsequious (adj)
  • Peculiar (adj)
  • Rouse (v)
  • Suit (n)
  • Vexation (n)
Iago: If ever I did dream of / such a matter, abhor me. (1.1.4-5)

Roderigo: Thou told’st me / Thou didst hold him in thy hate. (1.1.5-6)

Iago: (In personal suit to make me his lieutenant) (1.1.10)

Iago: But he (as loving his own pride and purposes) Evades them with a bombast circumstance Horribly stuffed with epithets of war (1.1.13-15)

Iago: (doting on his own obsequious bondage) (1.1.48)

Iago: And when they have lined their coats, / Do themselves homage. (1.1.56-57)

Iago: Heaven is my judge, not I for love and duty, / But seeming so, for my peculiar end. (1.1.61-62)

Iago: Call up her father. / Rouse him. (1.1.69-70)

Iago: Though that his joy be joy / Yet throw such changes of vexation on’t, / As it may lose some color. (1.1.73-75)

When you are confident you have the correct definitions, see me and you can complete the post-project quiz.

Pre-AP English II: "Haircut" Ending

In class we discussed the "unreliable narrator" (a narrator who may intentionally or accidentally obscure the truth). The barber in Ring Lardner's short story falls into this category. (Iago, in Othello may be another.)

First, read the short story, then answer the following question:
What about Jim's death is the narrator unaware of?

Wednesday, April 10, 2013

English I (Pre-AP): Tone in Fahrenheit 451

Read the following passage, then write a short paragraph identifying the scene's tone. You must support your idea with embedded text evidence.
He opened the bedroom door.

It was like coming into the cold marbled room of a mausoleum after the moon had set. Complete darkness, not a hint of the silver world outside, the windows tightly shut, the chamber a tomb-world where no sound from the great city could penetrate. The room was not empty.

He listened.

The little mosquito-delicate dancing hum in the air, the electrical murmur of a hidden wasp snug in its special pink warm nest. The music was almost loud enough so he could follow the tune.

He felt his smile slide away, melt, fold over, and down on itself like a tallow skin, like the stuff of a fantastic candle burning too long and now collapsing and now blown out. Darkness. He was not happy. He was not happy. He said the words to himself. He recognized this as the true state of affairs. He wore his happiness like a mask and the girl had run off across the lawn with the mask and there was no way of going to knock on her door and ask for it back.

Without turning on the light he imagined how this room would look. His wife stretched on the bed, uncovered and cold, like a body displayed on the lid of a tomb, her eyes fixed to the ceiling by invisible threads of steel, immovable. And in her ears the little Seashells, the thimble radios tamped tight, and an electronic ocean of sound, of music and talk and music and talk coming in, coming in on the shore of her unsleeping mind. The room was indeed empty. Every night the waves came in and bore her off on their great tides of sound, floating her, wide-eyed, toward morning. There had been no night in the last two years that Mildred had not swum that sea, had not gladly gone down in it for the third time.

The room was cold but nonetheless he felt he could not breathe. He did not wish to open the curtains and open the french windows, for he did not want the moon to come into the room. So, with the feeling of a man who will die in the next hour for lack of air,.he felt his way toward his open, separate, and therefore cold bed.
Remember, tone is how the author feels about his/her subject. It is separate from how the protagonist feels, as well as from how the reader feels (though it may be aligned with either or both). It is revealed primarily by the connotations inherent in the author's word choice (diction) as well as the author's selection of literary devices (metaphor, simile, hyperbole, irony, etc.). Consider using the following stem(s) in writing your paragraph:
The tone of the passage is [tone]. Bradbury makes this clear by choosing [quoted diction/literary devices], which make it clear [explanation].

Monday, April 8, 2013

Pre-AP English II: Open-Ended Questions

If you were absent today, please respond to the following Open-Ended Questions about Othello.
How does Roderigo help Iago? Why? Support answer with embedded text evidence.

Summarize the “conversation” Iago and Roderigo have with Brabantio. Support answer with embedded text evidence.
If you were in class today and would like another shot at earning a 70, re-try the questions above. If you would like to possibly earn an 85, answer the following question, as well:
In Act 1, Scene 2, line 58, why does Iago challenge Roderigo to a duel with the line "You, Roderigo! come sir, I am for you"? Support your answer with evidence from Act 1, Scene 1.

English I (Pre-AP): Open-Ended Questions

If you were absent today, please respond to the following Open-Ended Questions about Fahrenheit 451.
Summarize Montag’s relationship with Clarisse McClellan. Support your answer with embedded text evidence.

Describe what happens to the woman Montag tries to arrest when the firemen arrive at 11 North Elm St. Support your answer with embedded text evidence. (In other words, why doesn’t he arrest her?)
If you were in class today and would like another shot at earning a 70, re-try the questions above. If you would like to possibly earn an 85, answer the following question, as well:
Describe two pieces of household technology mentioned in the beginning of the novel. What are they similar to in our world.

English Classes: Midweek Reading Assignments

You will have a test on the text you are reading this Friday. Be prepared for the test by having read at least as far as...
  • Pre-AP English II: Through the end of Othello, Act 1, Scene 3

  • English I (Pre-AP): Through the end of the first section (The Hearth and the Salamander) of Fahrenheit 451

Sunday, April 7, 2013

English I (Pre-AP): Ender's Game on Sale

Amazon is currently offering a Kindle version of Ender's Game for $3.49. Although we won't be reading it this year (due to picking up Fahrenheit 451 for The Big Read), it will be assigned either for your summer reading or in Pre-AP English II class next year.

Either way, this is a great opportunity to pick up the book for cheap.

Go get it!

Friday, April 5, 2013

English Classes: Reading Assignments for April 5-7

On Monday, April 8, there will be quizzes covering the following material.

Pre-AP English II: Othello, Act 1, scenes 1 and 2.

English I (Pre-AP): Fahrenheit 451, from the beginning through the *** at the top of Page 41 (The last line you'll read is "Damn!" said Beatty. "You've gone right by the corner where we turn for the firehouse.")

You, of course, may read more if you wish. I won't stop you.

English I (Pre-AP): Fahrenheit 451 Opening

If you missed class on Thursday, please print out and complete the following assignment.
The first line of the novel is: It was a pleasure to burn. In the opening passage, draw an oval around each word/phrase that deals with pleasure, joy, sensuality, etc. (eg., the word pleasure in the first sentence and the phrase special pleasure in the second). Mark each word/phrase that deals with burning, fire, destruction, etc., with an “explosive balloon”(eg., the word burn in the first sentence and blackened in the second; some, like eaten in the second sentence will have both). When you are done, complete the answer at the bottom of the page.
If you would like to annotate your copy of the novel, you may do that instead of marking up the worksheet, but you should still complete the short-answer question at the bottom.

Thursday, April 4, 2013

English Students: Bonus Points Opportunity

Need some bonus points? Of course you do.

Follow these three easy steps:
  1. Enjoy the Shakespeare Dallas presentation at NorthPark Center this Saturday at 1pm.
  2. Take a picture of you and someone Shakespeare-y.
  3. Show me the picture on Monday.
Ka-ching! (Bonus bonus points if you get the Shakespeare-y person to make "duck lips.")

English I (Pre-AP): Bradbury/Fahrenheit 451 Presentation

If you missed the presentation on Ray Bradbury and Fahrenheit 451, please view the Prezi below and take complete notes.

Tuesday, April 2, 2013

Pre-AP English II: Reading Test Tips

If the Reading Test materials are completely separate from the Writing Test, I'll be able to update this until 6:30am on April 4th. Otherwise, like the Writing Test Tips post, I won't be able to provide additional tips beyond 6:30am on the 3rd.

[6:15pm] The following are some tips for the Open-Ended Question. Make sure you understand key terms in the question, particularly literary elements like "symbolize," "compare," "contrast," or "figuratively"
  • symbolize: likely a material object is representing a larger thing, possibly even an idea or concept
  • compare: what are similarities
  • contrast: what are differences
  • figuratively: something metaphorical (not necessarily a metaphor, but definitely not literally true)
Answer all parts of the question.
  • If the question asks about something "before and after," or "at the beginning and the end" your answer must address both. "Throughout the course of the story" also means "beginning and end." Sneaky.
Higher level vocabulary can boost your score if you use it correctly.

Your text evidence must relate to and support your idea/answer. Be very careful. Act as if your reader hasn't read the story and cannot fill in any gaps of logic you may have skipped over.

[4:15pm] Here's a page with tips for embedding quotations.

[3:40pm] Grammar Girl has "quick and dirty" tips covering: [3:20pm] The Oatmeal has several web-comic/poster guides to better spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Some include vocabulary of questionable appropriateness. Fair warning.

Pre-AP English II: Writing Test Tips

Due to test security issues, I will be unable to update this post after 6:30am on April 3rd. New tips will be loaded directly below this paragraph and will be preceded by the time I added the tip. Enjoy!

[3:40pm] Grammar Girl has "quick and dirty" tips covering: [3:20pm] The Oatmeal has several web-comic/poster guides to better spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Some include vocabulary of questionable appropriateness. Fair warning.

[3:00pm] Write your essay on the proper page. Remember that the prompts and the answer documents are symbol-coded. If the prompt has triangles at the top, be sure to write your response in the 26-line box with triangles at the top. Likewise circles, squares, diamonds, horseshoes, rainbows, four-leaf clovers, etc.

[2:55pm] Graphic organizers are powerful tool. Use them! [2:50pm] Make sure you write the correct essay based on the prompt. Remember:
  • Position = Persuasive
  • Explain = Expository

Sunday, March 31, 2013

English Students: Graphic Organizers

If you need to practice with more copies of the graphic organizers we used in class (and you do), please download and print them: Enjoy!

English I (Pre-AP): Two More "Flash" Fiction-Writing Resources

This page discusses writing stories 100 words or fewer. You should write more than that, but the page has a couple good tips, nonetheless.

Squidoo also has a flash fiction how-to page. Again, some of the material is for writing far less than you should on your End-of-Course exam, but some good observations and examples can be found, too.

Saturday, March 30, 2013

English I (Pre-AP): Short short stories

Please check out this website of short-short stories. Each is 250 words or less (if you write an average of 10 words per line on your literary composition on Monday, you'll write 260 words).

I've scanned the stories and haven't come across anything classroom-inappropriate, but don't let that deter you from reading them. (Conversely, if you come across something offensive, please don't freak out.)

Friday, March 22, 2013

All English Students: Field Test on End-of-Course Exam

I just found out there WILL be field test questions on your EoC exams.

We'll talk more about what that means next week.

Pre-AP English II: Persuasive Essay / Thoughts vs. Actions

If you missed class today, you missed an opportunity to write an End of Course-style Persuasive Essay. In approximately 45 minutes (and 26 lines) please respond to the following prompt:
Write an essay stating your position on which is more important: what a person thinks or what a person does. Be sure to —
  • state your position clearly
  • use appropriate organization
  • provide specific support for your argument
  • choose your words carefully
  • edit your writing for grammar, mechanics, and spelling
At the end of the essay please answer the following question: What are 2 clues in the prompt/"be sure to..." that inform you that you should write a persuasive, rather than an expository, essay? (Bullet points are fine.)

English I (Pre-AP): Timed Writing / Forgiveness

If you missed class today, you missed an opportunity to participate in an End of Course-style timed writing. In approximately 45 minutes (and 26 lines) please respond to the following prompt:
Write a story about the power of forgiveness. Be sure that your story is focused and complete and that it has an interesting plot and engaging characters.
At the end of the story please answer the following question: Besides the word "story" in the prompt, what are 2 other clues that you should not respond with an expository essay? (Bullet points are fine.)

Monday, March 18, 2013

English I (Pre-AP): No Fear Shakespeare/Romeo & Juliet — Not Quite a Solution

Online, at the No Fear Shakespeare website, you can read their edition of Romeo & Juliet for free.

If you have ordered a copy and are waiting for it to arrive AND you have dedicated internet access on your digital device, you may use the online version in class.

As you cannot annotate it, this will not work as a long-term solution, but it will get the job done until after the EOC test (when we'll work with the text more closely).

Pre-AP English II: Free Othello! (Kindle Version)

If you have the Kindle app on your computer or smart device, you may download a copy of Othello from the Amazon store for free. (You must download the book from your computer or web browser on your smart device; the book will by synced to the app the next time you run it.)

Saturday, March 9, 2013

All Students: Half Price Spring-Break Sale

Half Price Books is running a series of special during Spring Break. If you sign up for their mailing list you'll receive a set of coupons that lower their already low prices.

On Monday and Tuesday you'll save 40% on the most expensive item you buy either day.

Wednesday and Thursday the savings is 20%. Friday and Saturday it's 30%.

Sunday has the biggest savings (though on the least inventory): 50%.

Pre-AP English II students, consider getting any of these books: Othello or Julius Caesar by William Shakespeare or Lord of the Flies by William Golding.

English I (Pre-AP) students, books you need include No Fear Shakespeare: Romeo and Juliet in the Shakespeare section of the store and Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card.

Here's a list of local stores Call ahead to check for availability.

Thursday, March 7, 2013

English Students: The Big Spring Break Packet

If/when you lose your Big Spring Break Packet, download and print out another.

Enjoy!

Pre-AP English II: IWA Opportunity

IF you turn in your IWA at your class period on March 8, I will return it to you in PA*, and you can do one last draft over the break.

IF you turn in your IWA at the beginning of PA, I will review it and return it to you there and then, and you can do one last draft over the break.

IF you turn in your IWA at the end of PA, I will review it when we return from break -- you won't get another draft opportunity.

IF PA is cancelled, you must come by my room after 8th period to participate in this opportunity. If it looks to me like no one (else) is coming, I will go home and the opportunity will over.

IF you do not turn in your IWA at some point on the 8th, you will not have any further opportunity. Folders left under my door after I have left will be ignored when I return. Or stepped on. I may step on them. We'll see. At any rate they won't be evaluated.

DOING THE SPRING BREAK PACKET HAS NO EFFECT ON THE ANTHEM IWA.

*I may have to review it in PA; do not expect to pick it up first thing (you will have priority over those who turn in the draft at PA, though).

Sunday, March 3, 2013

Pre-AP English II: Anthem Socratic Seminar Questions

Be prepared to discuss these questions in class on Monday, March 4, 2013. Remember to support your answers -- even the World Connection questions -- with evidence from the book.

WORLD CONNECTION QUESTIONS
What would you do if your parents expected you to take a career that you didn't like? --B.C. (2nd)

If you were a member of the Anthem society, which "House" do you think/hope you would be assigned to? --J.C. (2nd)

If you made a new discovery, what would you do about it? --A.G. (1st)


CLOSE-ENDED QUESTIONS
Where did Equality 7 first see his reflection? --M.B. (1st)

Until what age did people go to school? --J.L. (1st)

How did Equality 7 react when he finally saw his reflection? --E.V. (2nd)


OPEN-ENDED QUESTIONS
Why does Equality 7 run from his society? --S.A. (2nd)

Why was there little to no technology in the Anthem society? --F.P. (1st)

Why was International 6 afraid to enter the tunnel? --A.S. (1st)


UNIVERSAL THEME / CORE QUESTIONS
Why is being "different" frowned upon by society? --A.E. (2nd)

At times when your life seems "dystopian" what do you do to improve it? --K.L. (1st)


LITERARY ANALYSIS QUESTIONS
How and why is the word "EGO" personified at the end of the end of the novel? --A.M. (1st)

What does the "Uncharted Forest" in Anthem (as well as many fairy tales) symbolize? --Mr. Mikesell

Thursday, February 28, 2013

Pre-AP English II: Plot v. Theme

Click through the following examples to see how to change a plot-based statement into a theme-based statement.

Example 1:
Rand uses irony and symbolism in the characters' name changes to help the reader understand that based on a lie.

Example 2:
Rand uses images of darkness and light to help the reader arrive at the conclusion that should be able to choose their own fate.

Monday, February 25, 2013

English I (Pre-AP): Of Mice and Men Tone Question

Please respond to the following question. Support your answer with embedded text evidence.
What is the tone of the final scene in the clearing, just prior to George killing Lennie?

If you don't already have this marked in your copy of the novel, this is the scene I'm referring to:
Lennie got up on his knees. “You ain’t gonna leave me, are ya, George? I know you ain’t.”
    George came stiffly near and sat down beside him. “No.”
    “I knowed it,” Lennie cried. “You ain’t that kind.”
    George was silent.Lennie said, “George.”
    “Yeah?”
    “I done another bad thing.”
    “It don’t make no difference,” George said, and he fell silent again.
    Only the topmost ridges were in the sun now. The shadow in the valley was blue and soft. From the distance came the sound of men shouting to one another. George turned his head and listened to the shouts.
    Lennie said, “George.”
    “Yeah?”
    “Ain’t you gonna give me hell?”
    “Give ya hell?”
    “Sure, like you always done before. Like, ‘If I di’n’t have you I’d take my fifty bucks—’”
    “Jesus Christ, Lennie! You can’t remember nothing that happens, but you remember ever’ word I say.”
    “Well, ain’t you gonna say it?”
    George shook himself. He said woodenly, “If I was alone I could live so easy.” His voice was monotonous, had no emphasis. “I could get a job an’ not have no mess.” He stopped.
    “Go on,” said Lennie. “An’ when the enda the month come—”
    “An’ when the end of the month came I could take my fifty bucks an’ go to a . . . . cat house—” He stopped again.
    Lennie looked eagerly at him. “Go on, George. Ain’t you gonna give me no more hell?”
    “No,” said George.
    “Well, I can go away,” said Lennie. “I’ll go right off in the hills an’ find a cave if you don’ want me.”
    George shook himself again. “No,” he said. “I want you to stay with me here.”
    Lennie said craftily—“Tell me like you done before.”
    “Tell you what?”
    “’Bout the other guys an’ about us.”
    George said, “Guys like us got no fambly. They make a little stake an’ then they blow it in. They ain’t got nobody in the worl’ that gives a hoot in hell about ‘em—”
    “But not us,” Lennie cried happily. “Tell about us now.”
    George was quiet for a moment. “But not us,” he said.
    “Because—”
    “Because I got you an’—”
    “An’ I got you. We got each other, that’s what, that gives a hoot in hell about us,” Lennie cried in triumph.
    The little evening breeze blew over the clearing and the leaves rustled and the wind waves flowed up the green pool. And the shouts of men sounded again, this time much closer than before.
    George took off his hat. He said shakily, “Take off your hat, Lennie. The air feels fine.”
    Lennie removed his hat dutifully and laid it on the ground in front of him.
    The shadow in the valley was bluer, and the evening came fast. On the wind the sound of crashing in the brush came to them.
    Lennie said, “Tell how it’s gonna be.”
    George had been listening to the distant sounds. For a moment he was businesslike. “Look acrost the river, Lennie, an’ I’ll tell you so you can almost see it.”Lennie turned his head and looked off across the pool and up the darkening slopes of the Gabilans. “We gonna get a little place,” George began. He reached in his side pocket and brought out Carlson’s Luger; he snapped off the safety, and the hand and gun lay on the ground behind Lennie’s back. He looked at the back of Lennie’s head, at the place where the spine and skull were joined.
    A man’s voice called from up the river, and another man answered.
    “Go on,” said Lennie.
    George raised the gun and his hand shook, and he dropped his hand to the ground again.
    “Go on,” said Lennie. “How’s it gonna be. We gonna get a little place.”
    “We’ll have a cow,” said George. “An’ we’ll have maybe a pig an’ chickens . . . . an’ down the flat we’ll have a . . . . little piece alfalfa—”
    “For the rabbits,” Lennie shouted.
    “For the rabbits,” George repeated.
    “And I get to tend the rabbits.”
    “An’ you get to tend the rabbits.”
    Lennie giggled with happiness. “An’ live on the fatta the lan’.”
    “Yes.”
    Lennie turned his head.
    “No, Lennie. Look down there acrost the river, like you can almost see the place.”
    Lennie obeyed him. George looked down at the gun.
    There were crashing footsteps in the brush now. George turned and looked toward them.
    “Go on, George. When we gonna do it?”
    “Gonna do it soon.”
    “Me an’ you.”
    “You . . . . an’ me. Ever’body gonna be nice to you. Ain’t gonna be no more trouble. Nobody gonna hurt nobody nor steal from ‘em.”
    Lennie said, “I thought you was mad at me, George.”
    “No,” said George. “No, Lennie. I ain’t mad. I never been mad, an’ I ain’t now. That’s a thing I want ya to know.”
    The voices came close now. George raised the gun and listened to the voices.
    Lennie begged, “Le’s do it now. Le’s get that place now.”
    “Sure, right now. I gotta. We gotta.”
   

Pre-AP English II: Anthem Socratic Seminar Question Types

Submit and answer one of each of the following by Thursday, February 28. I will pick several and post them to the website that evening. Be prepared to discuss them in class on Friday, March 1st. Questions may come from any section of Anthem; preference will likely be given to questions in the final half to third of the book. Include answers for each question.

WORLD CONNECTION QUESTIONS
Write one question connecting the text to the real world.

Example: If you could change your name, what would you change it to?


CLOSE-ENDED QUESTIONS

Write one question about the text that will help everyone in the class come to an agreement about events or characters in the text. This question usually has a “correct” answer.

Example: How did Equality-7 make light?


OPEN-ENDED QUESTIONS
Write one insightful question about the text that will require proof and group discussion and “construction of logic” to discover or explore the answer to the question.

Example: Why did Equality-7 rename Liberty-5 "The Golden One"?


UNIVERSAL THEME/ CORE QUESTIONS
Write one question dealing with a theme(s) of the text that will encourage group discussion about the universality of the text.

Example: Why is it wrong to not be given a choice in determining your destiny?


LITERARY ANALYSIS QUESTIONS
Write one question dealing with HOW an author chose to compose a literary piece. How did the author manipulate point of view, characterization, poetic form, archetypal hero patterns, for example?

Example: Why is Equality-7's/Liberty-5's/International-6's name ironic?

Due Thursday, February 28.

Sunday, February 24, 2013

Pre-AP English II: IWA Sample

In class on Friday we walked through the IWA thesis. We ran out of time before we got to the body paragraph. So here's a walkthrough on both....

The thesis paragraph has two parts. One part is the thesis, what you'll prove in your essay, which will include the theme of the novel (a theme is always a complete sentence). The other part is how you'll prove it, what literary devices you'll use to prove your thesis.
Ayn Rand uses the names of her characters to add to the meaning of her work. She uses symbolism and irony to help the reader understand that collectivism is based on lies.
The paragraph would probably be a little better if I revised it so the theme appeared in the first paragraph, something like this:
Ayn Rand uses the names of her characters to help the reader understand that collectivism is based on lies. She accomplishes this with the symbolism and irony inherent in her characters' names.

In the first body paragraph, you'll use text evidence from the novel to make your point using the first literary device mentioned in your thesis paragraph. In the case of this essay, you'll need the symbolic characters' names as part of your quoted evidence.
Nowhere is this more apparent than in the scene involving Equality 7-2521's visit to the Home of Scholars in Chapter VII. "Collective 0-0009, the oldest and wisest of the Council" quizzes Equality 7 about his discovery of electric light. When Equality 7 says he worked on the invention on his own, Collective 0 says, "'What is not thought by all men cannot be true.'" Clearly, this is a lie. Collective 0's name acts symbolically for the collectivist society Rand so strongly opposes. By putting the falsehood in his mouth, Rand implies that the collectivism he represents is also based on lies.
To complete this body paragraph, I'd need to look at another symbolic name and link it to a lie of the collectivist society, too.

In the second body paragraph, I'd look at two ironically-named characters, and analyze how the irony in their names demonstrates the falsity of the society.

Of course, in your essay you'll be looking at names and name changes, but you'll still need at least two quotes from the book to make your case for each body paragraph (four total for an 85%, six total for 100%).

Thursday, February 14, 2013

English Students: "Moving" Expository Essay Prompt

Read the information in the box below.

Why are you reading the information in this box? You are wasting time. Even if there were something relevant in this box, it would not help you write your essay successfully. It would only result in your essay sounding like everyone else’s essay, and that will hurt your score.

Did you read the information in the box above? Think carefully about your shame, and your shame for reading this paragraph, too.

Write an essay explaining the effect moving to a new place can have on a person’s life. Be sure to —
  • clearly state your thesis
  • organize and develop your ideas effectively
  • choose your words carefully
  • edit your writing for grammar, mechanics, and spelling

Monday, February 11, 2013

English Classes: Quickwrite on Improving Performance Second Semester

At the beginning of this six weeks, students were assigned a quickwrite on what they could do to improve their performance this semester. If you did not complete the assignment, please do so before I check English Binders later this week.

3-5 sentences.


Please place this in the front of your English Binder to receive full credit.

Thursday, February 7, 2013

English I (Pre-AP): Of Mice and Men Test Preview

Tomorrow, you'll have a test on the first chapter of John Steinbeck's novel, Of Mice and Men. (If you haven't yet obtained a copy, print off the first nine pages from this online copy.)

We'll be on a shortened period, you'll have an advantage over the rest of the class, if you already know the following...

Literary Devices
  • Alliteration
  • Allusion
  • Comparison
  • Contrast
  • Dialogue
  • Hyperbole
  • Metaphor
  • Onomatopoeia
  • Simile
  • Third-Person Objective Point of View
Vocabulary
  • Careless
  • Clumsy
  • Contempt
  • Empathy
  • Establish
  • Familiarity
  • Heron
  • Irrelevant
  • Lumbered
  • Recumbent
  • Skittering
  • Stilt(ed)
  • Willow
Mood/Tone Words
  • Bleak
  • Cheerful
  • Inquisitive
  • Sinister
  • Tranquil

Pre-AP English II: Anthem Test Preview

Tomorrow you will be taking an AP-style test on Anthem. The excerpt you'll be tested on is somewhere in the first half of the novel, so be prepared. Also, you'll need to know the following...

Literary Devices
  • Alliteration
  • Allusion
  • Flashback
  • Foreshadowing
  • Irony
  • Metaphor
  • Onomatopoeia
  • Oxymoron
  • Paradox
  • Personification
  • Simile
Wouldn't hurt you to know the meaning of the word abstract, either.

Pre-AP English II: IWA for Anthem

Base your IWA on one of the following prompts:
Novelists and playwrights often use the names of their characters to add meaning to their work.In a well-organized essay, analyze the significance of character names and name-changes in Anthem, and explain how they contribute to the novella’s meaning.


Darkness and light have long been used to symbolize ignorance and knowledge or sin and redemption. In a well-organized essay, analyze Rand’s use of darkness and light in Anthem, and discuss the way these symbols contribute to the overall meaning of the novella.
Tips to success:

Extensive plot summary will result in a REDO grade (no points), not a REVISE (85 points). Look at diction, metaphor, imagery, etc., and how the author’s use of these techniques contributes to meaning.

Remember that only REVISE and ACCEPTED essays will be taken for a grade, so submit your IWA early, rather than at the last minute to ensure that your essay will count!

*** More than 10 careless spelling mistakes***
will result in a REDO grade


All essays must be typed and adhere to the MLA formatting requirements (see below). All essays must be submitted with the draft in the LEFT pocket (inside front cover) of a 2-pocket portfolio folder. Failure to meet these minimum requirements will result in the draft being returned to the student unevaluated and with no score recorded.
  • Type your paper on a computer and print it out on standard, white 8.5 x 11-inch paper.

  • Double-space the text of your paper (paragraph settings). Use Times New Roman (Garamond if you're “fancy”); the font size should be 12 pt. (font settings).

  • Leave only one space after periods or other punctuation marks.

  • Set the margins of your document to 1" on all sides.

  • Indent the first line of paragraphs one half-inch from the left margin. MLA recommends that you use the Tab key as opposed to pushing the Space Bar five times, or set your paragraphs to indent the first line 0.5". Do not skip a line (i.e., leave a blank line) between paragraphs.

Draft Deadline: Friday, February 15
85 Minimum Deadline: Friday, February 22
Drop Dead Deadline: Friday, March 1

Tuesday, February 5, 2013

English I (Pre-AP): Steinbeck/Of Mice and Men Presentation

Today's presentation is on the class blog. There were a couple interesting slides at the end that we didn't get to. Check them out.

Sunday, February 3, 2013

English Students: EOC Challenge

FOR THE RECORD: If 95% of my students pass their End-of-Course (EOC) exam, I will celebrate their achievement by dyeing my hair red AND shaving my sideburns into stars (starburns).

Friday, February 1, 2013

English Students: Weekend Reading Assignments

Pre-AP English II: Read through Chapter III (3) of Anthem.

English I (Pre-AP) Read the first chapter of Of Mice and Men.

Wednesday, January 30, 2013

Pre-AP English II: Ain't I a "Whatever" Essay

In class today, we worked on our own versions of Sojourner Truth's speech, "Ain't I a Woman."

In preparation for the assignment we listed stereotypes someone might have about some aspect of our lives (race/ethnicity, gender, occupation, neighborhood, size, athletic or intellectual ability, etc.) and how we don't fit that mold.

For instance, my information looked like this:

An area of my life where I defy/contradict stereotype:
  • English Teacher
Three stereotypes typically believed about people like me.
  1. English teachers are boring

  2. English teachers always have their noses stuck in books

  3. English teachers have perfect grammar and spelling
Six ways I defy/contradict those stereotypes:
  1. I incorporate humor into my classes

  2. I celebrate student achievement in weird and wonderful ways like wearing a prom dress or shaving my head

  3. I watch a lot of television, especially cartoons and crime/mystery shows

  4. Sometimes I write short stories

  5. I frequently use grammar ironically or pronounce words they way they're spelled (high-per-bowl for hyperbole)

  6. I'm human. I make mistakes.


The next step was to write an essay similar to Sojourner Truth's. Our first paragraph was devoted to establishing how we aren't like what other people expect. Our body paragraphs each addressed one of the stereotypes that we defy/contradict. Below is my opening:
Sometimes people make assumptions about me when they hear I'm an English teacher. Like they think they know me. Like they think I have to behave they way they expect. But I'm not that way ... for reals.

For instance, people think that I must always use proper grammar and spelling. But sometimes I don't, and ain't I an English teacher? Using slang and other colloquialisms makes the language fun, and I want my students to enjoy learning English. Still, people think that English teachers want the language to be stuffy. I'm not that way, and ain't I an English teacher?
You modify my introduction, or use a variation of Sojourner Truth's, or come up with your own.

Tuesday, January 29, 2013

Pre-AP English II: Sojourner Truth's "Ain't I a Woman"

If you lose your copy of Sojourner Truth's "Ain't I a Woman" speech, please print out another copy at the Internet History Sourcebook (Fordham University).

Pre-AP English II: Persuasion Presentation

Below is Monday's presentation on Persuasive Techniques. If you missed class, please make sure you are familiar with the content of the presentation and add the big ideas to your notes.

Friday, January 25, 2013

English I (Pre-AP): Vocabulary from Lightning Thief, Set 2

Look up the following words in the dictionary (or dictionary.com, online). Select the definition that best fits the context as used in the sentences, below. (If you need additional context, you’ll find the sentence at the page number indicated.) In some cases you may need to look up the root word and incorporate its meaning into your definition.
  • Bristle (v.):
  • Charisma (n.):
  • Mesmerizing (adj.):
  • Parapet (n.):
  • Predicament (n.):
  • Pretense (n.):
  • Scheme (n.):


The hairs on my arms bristled. (p. 304)

Grover’s predicament got me moving again. (p. 304)

The Furies circled the parapets, high in the gloom. (p. 307)

He had the same intense eyes, the same kind of mesmerizing, evil charisma. (p. 309)

“You dare keep up this pretense, after what you have done?” (p. 311)

“Had I not sent my Fury ... Poseidon might have succeeded in hiding his scheme to start a war.” (p. 312)

Pre-AP English II: Anthem Background

Below is today's presentation on things that influenced Anthem. After viewing it, please write a quick paragraph exploring your personal anthem, bearing in mind that an anthem identifies and celebrates your personal values:
  1. Identify a song that you relate to and makes you feel good about yourself;
  2. If no song really does the trick, identify what your values are and how a song might celebrate those.
Due: Monday 1/28

Thursday, January 24, 2013

Pre-AP English II: Ayn Rand Presentation

Below is this morning's Ayn Rand presentation. After viewing it, please write a quick paragraph
  1. Identifying two life events that have changed the way you see the world, and
  2. What conclusion about life you've drawn because of those events
Due: Friday 1/25

Monday, January 14, 2013

English I (Pre-AP): Study Notes

Below are the notes we discussed in class.

Reading/Comprehension Skills. (11/53)
Make complex inferences about text and use textual evidence to support understanding.

Writing/Writing Process. (10/53)
Edit drafts for grammar, mechanics, and spelling.

Like bellringers, but only 1 problem in each sentence

Writing/Writing Process. (5/53)
Revise drafts to improve style, word choice, figurative language, sentence variety, and subtlety of meaning after rethinking how well questions of purpose, audience, and genre have been addressed

Sentence combination
  • (usually) one of 2 shortest
  • never 2 sentences joined by comma
Choose between words that are "correct" and words that are "correct and have the same meaning"
“letted” => able
or => permitted/allowed
(pick the one that doesn’t change the meaning)

Informal : The book is about family, wealth, and stuff.
Formal: The book is about family and wealth, among other things.

Add a sentence = look for clues to show where the sentence should be inserted.

Reading/Comprehension of Literary Text/Poetry. (5/53)
Analyze the effects of diction and imagery (e.g., controlling images, figurative language, understatement, overstatement, irony, paradox) in poetry.

Syntax = word order
Diction = word choice
Figurative language = literary devices
Denotation (denotes) = dictionary definition
Connotation=the "feeling" carried by the word

(in)formality
tone (author’s attitude)
clarity

Reading/Comprehension of Informational Text/Expository Text. (4/53)
Make subtle inferences and draw complex conclusions about the ideas in text and their organizational patterns.

Reading/Vocabulary Development. (3/53)
Analyze textual context (within a sentence and in larger sections of text) to distinguish between the denotative and connotative meanings of words.

Denotative = dictionary definition
Connotative = the “feeling” of the word

Reading/Vocabulary Development. (3/53)
Use a dictionary, a glossary, or a thesaurus (printed or electronic) to determine or confirm the meanings of words and phrases, including their connotations and denotations, and their etymology.

Etymology: word origin (includes nation of origin, prefix/root/suffix)

Reading/Comprehension of Literary Text/Fiction. (3/53)
Analyze non-linear plot development (e.g., flashbacks, foreshadowing, sub-plots, parallel plot structures) and compare it to linear plot development.

Flashback: refers back to something earlier in story
Foreshadowing: hints at something that will happen later
Subplot: something that happens in the story not related to the main plot
Parallel plot structure: 2 things happening at once in story

Reading/Comprehension of Literary Text/Fiction. (3/53)
Analyze how authors develop complex yet believable characters in works of fiction through a range of literacy devices, including character foils.

Character foil: A character who is included in the story to make the main character more believable or easier to understand by comparison to the foil.

Reading/Comprehension of Literary Text/Fiction. (3/53)
Analyze the way in which a work of fiction is shaped by the narrator’s point of view.

First Person (I/Me/Us/Our); the story is seen through the eyes of the narrator (like a first-person shooter video game)
Third Person (He/Him/She/Her/Them/They); the narrator is a little distant from the reader

Reading/Comprehension of Informational Text/Expository Text. (3/53)
Summarize text and distinguish between a summary that captures the main ideas and elements of a text and a critique that takes a position and expresses an opinion.

Main idea (thesis) vs. Supporting ideas
Facts vs. Opinion

Reading/Comprehension of Literary Text/Poetry. (5/53)

Analyze the effects of diction and imagery (e.g., controlling images, figurative language, understatement, overstatement, irony, paradox) in poetry.

Syntax = word order
Diction = word choice
Figurative language = literary devices
Denotation (denotes)=dictionary definition
Connotation=the way the word makes you feel

(in)formality
tone (author’s attitude)
clarity